tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post4304015499290502729..comments2024-01-12T19:59:04.720+04:00Comments on American Muslima Writer -Daring to Work Towards Jannah: IWA Poetry contest -a snippet of my poem...American Muslima Writerhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/17494763839971976761noreply@blogger.comBlogger5125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post-90348377130953692772009-04-15T15:39:00.000+04:002009-04-15T15:39:00.000+04:00I'm glad you likes my idea :) Didn't want to offen...I'm glad you likes my idea :) Didn't want to offend you by critiquing, but sometimes (ok, the one time) I gave writing to my friends to read they just said "Yeah it was great" and I wished they'd thought more about it, lol.<br /><br />Oh, my baby's just coming up to 16 months and I know she'll be difficult... and today she's started real tantrums.. like really bad. She was throwing her head around when I put her shirt on adn tonight we had to let her stand weeing on a towel for half an hour because she was refusing her nappy... oh God can she read my thoughts, she's pullng at her nappy and screaming now!!<br /><br />Good luck weaning.. I'm realy dreading it.<br /><br />Oh, and yes, ode to the shoe thrower. I heard he got in trouble -they should have awarded him something :)Strawberrylifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07327298472103196148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post-22921500427327154662009-04-15T13:52:00.000+04:002009-04-15T13:52:00.000+04:00LOMAN!!! NO WAY!!! ARGGG!! You shoulda talked to ...LOMAN!!! NO WAY!!! ARGGG!! You shoulda talked to me I woulda been thrilled!!! Was I yelling at my kids or chasing them around or something bad ? LMAO! You know it's strange but once I saw a woman staring at me like she wanted to talk to me or recognized me but then she just walked off. I was like whats that about? Should I go back and talk to her? Lol I wonderd if she knew me from blogs. Maybe it was you! :D How far from me were you?<br />AND WHAT WERE YOU DOING WAY UP IN UAE? MRS IN OMAN? HEHEHE. Next time you're up here drop me an e-mail I'd be more than happy to meet up.<br />Yes already it's been sooo tough to wean!<br /><br />Faith, my son is 20months and half. But he's sooo attatched. I weaned my daughter at 1 yr 7 months and it only took half a week. But so far Son is resisting majorly. MAJORLY!!!!<br /><br />Well abou the shoe i think so too but i wanted it to be something really insulting towards what some people write about Allah. Plus it's a hat tip to the Bush Shoe Thrower!;)<br />Plus it shows more my anger for the lines u duidn't read yet Lol insha'Allah the whole poem will make more sence.<br />I like your line at the end and changed it thus so. I wasn't satisfied either with it but wasn't sure is Spoken By was a proper way to put it but asked hubby and he said yes cause wehen we quote Qur'an we say Allah said: etc... So trhanks for that.American Muslima Writerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17494763839971976761noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post-82179366178725550132009-04-14T15:02:00.000+04:002009-04-14T15:02:00.000+04:00Instead of "Created perfectly by him, the Criterio...Instead of "Created perfectly by him, the Criterion", you could also try "Spoken perfectly by him, the Criterion".. I think "spoken perfectly" sounds better than "perfectly said".<br /><br />Just a suggestion. -i can't help myself!Strawberrylifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07327298472103196148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post-59284934746450981352009-04-14T14:56:00.000+04:002009-04-14T14:56:00.000+04:00Oh, I want to wean my baby girl soon... how old is...Oh, I want to wean my baby girl soon... how old is your boy? I think mine will be quite hard// she feeds A LOT!! And I enjoy it as well but now she's becoming more mobile I want her to be more independent in this way too. She already loves cow's milk but mine is best ;)<br />She's 15 months.<br /><br />And I love the poem, especially the last few lines you wrote of. But the part about the shoe, I think it takes away from the mood created by the other lines. But I still love it!! Great start.<br />xxStrawberrylifehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07327298472103196148noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4797518818272666624.post-56986271892220284632009-04-13T22:33:00.000+04:002009-04-13T22:33:00.000+04:00AMW-you are so talented, masha'allah! Just wanted ...AMW-you are so talented, masha'allah! Just wanted to drop by and say thanx for your comments of concern on my blog. Very sweet of you! Although u had no idea, i saw you once in Al-Ain mall with your two kids! :-) wasn't sure how you would have reacted if I had approached you! So, you actually completed one of your goals for '09, but back in '08. <BR/><BR/>Weaning your son will be tough, probably more for you. It was super hard for me and k2 - i loved that bond and it was hard when it was broken. :.(L_Omanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00640842359904342033noreply@blogger.com